docs(keycloak-session-store): rewrite the prose and the diagram labels out of AI register
Two things read as machine-written and both are now fixed with the repository's own tooling. The diagram labels counted abstractions instead of naming things — "틀린 예측 5건", "조용한 실패 9건", "로컬 아티팩트 76건". Replaced with what those actually were, which is also more useful in a drawing: 틀린 예측 5건 -> A-1 · A-2 · A-6 · B-4 · B-6 조용한 실패 9건 -> NetworkPolicy · tc · kill · iptables 로컬 아티팩트 76건 -> 연결수 0 · 50µs A층 결론 3건 반전 -> A-1 · A-2 · A-8 The prose was staccato: 30.7 characters average against a 48-75 reference, 45% of sentences under 25 characters, and causal connectives at 4.9 per 100 against a floor of 6. check_prose reported an error for closing six sentences with 「~것이 ~이다」. Roughly ninety sentences were rewritten — joining pairs that carry a real causal or contrastive relation, and varying the joins. The first pass overcorrected into a new monotony (는데 at 47 occurrences, connectives up to 31.9, above the ceiling), so twenty-three of those were varied into 지만, -고, em-dashes, or split back apart. check_prose FAIL error 1 -> OK error 0 평균 문장 길이 30.7 -> 43.1 25자 미만 비율 45.4% -> 23.4% 이유 연결어미 4.9 -> within range Two style_profile numbers still read outside the band, and the reason is worth writing down rather than editing around: the tool counts each image caption as a sentence, and this document carries 28 diagrams. Excluding captions and separators the prose is 46.4 characters average with 14.3% short — inside the reference range. Padding sentences to move the remaining gap is what CLAUDE.md forbids, so it stops here. Protected values were checked against source and are unchanged: 153건/149건, 1,872 ms, 20,000 ms, 22.2 초, 2305초, 845361바이트, 8856건, 205.7ms, 106초. All 28 diagrams still lint clean with no sentence left on any canvas. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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"emphasis": "primary",
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"description": "결과를 보고 나면 정직하게 쓸 수 없다.",
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"details": [
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"틀린 예측 5건"
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"A-1 · A-2 · A-6 · B-4 · B-6"
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"emphasis": "primary",
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"description": "아무 일도 없었다와 영향이 없다를 가른다.",
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"조용한 실패 9건"
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"conntrack · PID 1 · kube-router"
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