Two things read as machine-written and both are now fixed with the
repository's own tooling.
The diagram labels counted abstractions instead of naming things —
"틀린 예측 5건", "조용한 실패 9건", "로컬 아티팩트 76건". Replaced with what
those actually were, which is also more useful in a drawing:
틀린 예측 5건 -> A-1 · A-2 · A-6 · B-4 · B-6
조용한 실패 9건 -> NetworkPolicy · tc · kill · iptables
로컬 아티팩트 76건 -> 연결수 0 · 50µs
A층 결론 3건 반전 -> A-1 · A-2 · A-8
The prose was staccato: 30.7 characters average against a 48-75 reference,
45% of sentences under 25 characters, and causal connectives at 4.9 per 100
against a floor of 6. check_prose reported an error for closing six
sentences with 「~것이 ~이다」.
Roughly ninety sentences were rewritten — joining pairs that carry a real
causal or contrastive relation, and varying the joins. The first pass
overcorrected into a new monotony (는데 at 47 occurrences, connectives up to
31.9, above the ceiling), so twenty-three of those were varied into 지만,
-고, em-dashes, or split back apart.
check_prose FAIL error 1 -> OK error 0
평균 문장 길이 30.7 -> 43.1
25자 미만 비율 45.4% -> 23.4%
이유 연결어미 4.9 -> within range
Two style_profile numbers still read outside the band, and the reason is
worth writing down rather than editing around: the tool counts each image
caption as a sentence, and this document carries 28 diagrams. Excluding
captions and separators the prose is 46.4 characters average with 14.3%
short — inside the reference range. Padding sentences to move the remaining
gap is what CLAUDE.md forbids, so it stops here.
Protected values were checked against source and are unchanged: 153건/149건,
1,872 ms, 20,000 ms, 22.2 초, 2305초, 845361바이트, 8856건, 205.7ms, 106초.
All 28 diagrams still lint clean with no sentence left on any canvas.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
