기반 가이드 7단계로 실험대를 철거하고 다시 세운 뒤 virtualization setup 9편과 keycloak-session-store 26편을 순서대로 밟았다. 24편은 끝까지, 11편은 되는 데까지 밟았고 밟은 범위를 편마다 적었다. 명령이 못 도는 것을 고쳤다. - kubectl 을 `kc-lab-1` 에서 치라고 적었는데 그 기계에 kubeconfig 가 없다. 라벨 639개와 각 편의 「어디서 치는가」를 `[lab host]` 로 옮겼다 - `-o custom-columns=…[0]…` 이 zsh 에서 글로브로 읽혀 안 돈다. 28곳에 따옴표 - busybox `sed` 가 끝 개행을 안 붙여 A-3 의 측정이 언제나 0 이었다 - `--token-file ~/node-token` 뒤에 그 파일을 지우면 k3s agent 가 재부팅을 못 견딘다. `/etc/rancher/node-token` 으로 옮기는 처방을 재서 넣었다 - 게스트에 없는 도구를 전제로 한 명령 넷 — `conntrack`·`dig`·`strings`·`nginx -v` - `echo` 와 JWT 헤더가 `"이름" : [ 값 ]` 으로 찍는데 문서는 공백 없이 옮겨 적어 그 실측으로 만든 grep·sed 가 한 줄도 못 잡는다 - B-0 이 `directAccessGrantsEnabled` 와 계정 완성을 빠뜨려 B-3 이 못 돈다 - D-4·D-4a 가 `test-server` 와 `certbot-renew.*` 를 가리키는데 실제로는 `kc-lab-edge` 의 `certbot.service` 다 - `virsh setmaxmem --config` 를 `dominfo` 로 판정하면 틀린다. `--inactive` 로 - `LIBVIRT_DEFAULT_URI` 를 rc 에만 넣으면 `ssh host '명령'` 에서 안 먹는다 결과가 조건부인 것을 갈랐다. - readiness 는 즉시 안 뒤집힌다. A-1·A-2 의 60초 창을 적었다 - 03 의 층 ②③ `301` 은 04 이후의 값이고 그 단계에서는 `404` 다 - A-0 의 로그 필터를 요청 직후에 치면 정반대 결론이 나온다 - A-5 의 한 방향 차단은 잠깐 `1` 이었다 `2` 로 돌아온다 증거는 두 프로젝트의 `evidence/raw/` 에 99벌을 README 와 함께 남겼다. 비밀은 길이만 적었고 화면에 찍힌 토큰은 가렸다. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
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name: writing-practitioner-guides
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description: Use when writing hands-on guides, runbooks, troubleshooting docs, lab walkthroughs, or validation procedures that a human will execute themselves in a terminal over SSH. Symptoms that this applies - the reader is expected to type the commands, the doc teaches how to read a system rather than reporting a result, or a draft contains python -c, embedded JSON parsing, one-liners nobody types by hand, or a config file or YAML authored with printf/echo >>/heredoc instead of an editor.
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---
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# Writing Practitioner Guides
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## Overview
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**Optimize for human operation, not command compactness.**
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A guide is not a script. The reader types each command, reads its raw output,
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and decides what to do next. Commands that are efficient for an agent to run
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once are often useless for a human learning to read a system.
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The failure this prevents: an agent writes `curl … | python3 -c 'import json…'`
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because it produces a clean answer in one call. The reader gets the answer and
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learns nothing about the tool they will need at 3am.
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## The boundary
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Three tiers. Pick the lowest one that fits.
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```
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interactive command → short pipeline → saved script file
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```
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| Tier | When | Form |
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| **interactive** | reading state, one question | `kubectl get pods`, `ss -lntp`, `journalctl -u nginx -n 50` |
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| **short pipeline** | filtering that a person would actually type | `ps aux \| grep java`, `… \| jq .status`, `for p in a b; do … done` |
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| **saved script** | it has become a program | write the file with an editor, then run it |
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**Move to a saved script when any of these is true:**
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- multiple branches (`if`) or nested loops
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- combining several requests and computing across them
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- non-trivial JSON transformation
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- you cannot tell what it does by reading it once
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- it will be run again later
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For a saved script, the guide says to open an editor, shows the code as a
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**separate file listing** (not a terminal command), then shows the run command.
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```bash
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vim scripts/check_sessions.py
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```
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```python
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# file: scripts/check_sessions.py
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...
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```
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```bash
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python3 scripts/check_sessions.py
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```
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Terminal command ≠ program source. Never blur them with a heredoc.
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## Files the reader has to understand before changing them
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The tiers above stop at the saved script. The same split reaches further: **any
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file whose content the reader must read and understand to change it is written
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in an editor, not assembled by a shell one-liner.** Config files and YAML are
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that kind of file.
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> **조회·진단·실행은 CLI를 적극 사용하고, 사람이 내용을 이해하면서 작성해야 하는 설정 파일은
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> 에디터를 사용한다.**
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| Reading or acting on the system → CLI | Authoring a file a human must understand → editor |
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| CPU flags → `grep /proc/cpuinfo`, `lscpu` | cloud-init YAML → `nano kc-lab-1.yaml` |
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| service state → `systemctl status` | systemd unit → `sudo nano /etc/systemd/system/x.service` |
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| VM state → `virsh list --all` | `nginx.conf` → `sudo nano /etc/nginx/nginx.conf` |
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| network → `ip addr`, `virsh net-list --all` | `~/.bashrc` → `nano ~/.bashrc` |
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| logs → `journalctl -u x` | Kubernetes manifest → `nano deploy.yaml` |
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| fetch / copy → `curl`, `cp`, `scp` | a script → `nano x.sh` → `chmod +x x.sh` → `./x.sh` |
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| create a VM → `virt-install` | |
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### This rule is not "replace sed with nano"
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> 단순히 **「`sed`를 `nano`로 바꿔라」**라고 하면 안 됩니다. 그러면 모든 shell 명령을 기계적으로
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> 에디터 작업으로 바꿀 가능성이 큽니다.
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The trigger is the *file-authoring step*, not the appearance of a shell tool.
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| Kind | Examples | Verdict |
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| what an operator types by hand | `virsh`, `systemctl`, `ssh`, `curl`, `virt-install` | keep |
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| reading / diagnosing | `grep`, `lsmod`, `cat`, `stat`, `groups` | keep |
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| shell tricks that author a file | `printf >`, `echo >>`, `cat <<EOF`, `python3 -c`, `ssh '… cat > …'` | rewrite as an editor step |
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A pipe is not the problem. A 12-line `virt-install` is not the problem —
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creating the VM *is* that command's purpose, so the CLI is the right way to show
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it. `sed` is fine for a query or a throwaway substitution; it is wrong as the
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default interface for editing config, because what the reader will actually do
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during an incident is open the file and read what is in it.
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### Rewrite: `~/.bashrc`
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```bash
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# before
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echo 'export LIBVIRT_DEFAULT_URI=qemu:///system' >> ~/.bashrc
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virsh uri
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```
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```bash
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# after
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nano ~/.bashrc
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```
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```text
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export LIBVIRT_DEFAULT_URI=qemu:///system
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```
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```bash
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source ~/.bashrc
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virsh uri
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```
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Two reasons, and the second is the one that gets forgotten:
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1. The reader sees the chain — file → variable → reload this shell → `virsh`
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now resolves that URI. `echo >>` produces only the end state.
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2. **`echo >>` is not idempotent.** Someone who walks the guide a second time
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appends the same line again. Opening the file shows what is already there.
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### Rewrite: cloud-init meta-data
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```bash
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# before
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printf 'instance-id: kc-lab-1-%s\nlocal-hostname: kc-lab-1\n' "$(date +%s)" > meta-kc-lab-1
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```
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```bash
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# after
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nano meta-kc-lab-1
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```
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```yaml
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instance-id: kc-lab-1-20260912
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local-hostname: kc-lab-1
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```
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> `instance-id`는 이전 cloud-init 실행과 다른 인스턴스로 인식시키기 위해 이전 값과 겹치지 않게
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> 지정한다.
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The `printf` form makes the reader decode `%s`, `\n`, `$(...)`, `date +%s` and
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`>` before reaching the two keys the page is about. A document teaching
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cloud-init should not be teaching shell `printf`. The editor form also gives the
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one line about `instance-id` a place to sit, right where it is typed.
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### Rewrite: a file on a remote host
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```bash
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# before
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ssh donghyeon@192.168.122.11 'umask 077; cat > ~/kc-lab-2.yaml' < kc-lab-2.yaml
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ssh donghyeon@192.168.122.11 'cloud-init schema -c ~/kc-lab-2.yaml; rm -f ~/kc-lab-2.yaml'
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```
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```bash
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# after
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scp kc-lab-2.yaml donghyeon@192.168.122.11:~/
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ssh donghyeon@192.168.122.11
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```
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then, on the guest:
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```bash
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chmod 600 ~/kc-lab-2.yaml
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cloud-init schema -c ~/kc-lab-2.yaml
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rm ~/kc-lab-2.yaml
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```
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The first line asked the reader to hold SSH, redirection, `umask`, file creation
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and local stdin at once. The rewrite uses more commands and puts fewer things in
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each: **one action, one command.** In a guide someone is learning from, that
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trade is the right way round.
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One more rewrite belongs to this rule — replacing a `python3 -c` YAML check with
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the format's own validator. It sits in **Command priority** below, where the
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ranking it changes lives.
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## Command priority
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| Rank | Reach for | Examples |
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| 1 | the system's own CLI | `kubectl`, `systemctl`, `psql`, `redis-cli`, `docker compose` |
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| 2 | standard OS tools | `ps`, `ss`, `lsof`, `free`, `top`, `dmesg` |
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| 3 | network / protocol tools | `curl`, `dig`, `openssl`, `nc`, `tcpdump` |
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| 4 | short Unix combinators | `grep`, `jq`, `awk`, `head`, `tail`, `less`, `watch` |
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| — | **avoid** | python/node heredocs, `python -c` that *processes data*, giant awk programs, pipelines built to produce one tidy answer |
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**The line is doing-the-work vs checking-a-fact, not the language.**
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```bash
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# not fine — this is data processing the native tool should do
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curl -s "$URL" | python3 -c '
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import json,sys
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for r in json.load(sys.stdin)["data"]["result"]:
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print(r["metric"]["pod"], r["value"][1])'
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```
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That one iterates, reshapes, and formats. `jq`, or the tool's own
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output flag, does that — and when neither is installed, say so and show the
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raw output instead of writing a parser.
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`grep`, `jq`, `awk`, and a one-line `for` are what practitioners type. Do not
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ban them. Ban the ones written for the *agent's* convenience.
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### Validate with the format's own checker first
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Checking a fact is allowed — but a hand-rolled syntax check is the *last*
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resort, not the default. If the domain ships a command that validates this file,
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that command is the step. Drop to a one-line syntax check only when nothing
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validates the format.
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```bash
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# before — checks that it parses as YAML, and nothing else
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python3 -c 'import yaml,sys; yaml.safe_load(open("kc-lab-1.yaml")); print("YAML OK")'
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# after — the domain's own validator: schema, keys, and deprecations too
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cloud-init schema -c ~/kc-lab-2.yaml
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```
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Same rank elsewhere: `nginx -t`, `sshd -t`, `systemd-analyze verify x.service`,
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`kubectl apply --dry-run=server -f deploy.yaml`, `terraform validate`,
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`docker compose config`. Each one is also the command the reader will reach for
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when the service refuses to start, which a `python3 -c` line never becomes.
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### Two shapes of the same tool
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Most tools have a *reading* form and a *value-extracting* form. Pick by what
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the reader does next with the output.
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| The reader will… | Form | Example |
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| **look at the response** and judge | reading form | `curl -I <url>` · `curl -v <url>` |
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| **compare or count the value** across runs or hosts | extracting form | `curl -s -o /dev/null -w '%{http_code}\n' <url>` |
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The extracting form hides everything except the field you chose. Use it only
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when that field *is* the answer — a status code you will compare before and
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after an injection, or a number you will repeat 900 times. When the reader is
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still figuring out what is wrong, they need the headers and the TLS handshake,
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not `200`.
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Same split elsewhere: `kubectl get` (read) vs `-o jsonpath=` (extract),
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`systemctl status` (read) vs `systemctl show -p X --value` (extract),
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`psql` interactive (read) vs `psql -tAc` (extract).
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**Show the reading form first at least once per tool.** A reader who has only
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ever seen `-w '%{http_code}'` cannot debug a TLS error.
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## Progressive narrowing
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Never jump to the precise command. Show the widening-to-narrowing path the
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reader will actually walk.
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```
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list / status → detail / describe → logs → targeted inspection
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```
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```bash
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kubectl get pods # what is there
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kubectl get pods -o wide # where, and on which node
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kubectl describe pod api-7c874-8m2js # why is this one unhappy
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kubectl logs api-7c874-8m2js # what did it say
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kubectl logs api-7c874-8m2js --previous # what did it say before it died
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```
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**Observe before filtering.** Show the raw output at least once before piping
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it. A reader who has never seen `ss -lntp` output needs to see it whole.
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## Mutation ordering
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```
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observe → diagnose → reproduce → mutate
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```
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`rm`, `kill`, `delete`, `UPDATE`, restart, config change do not appear in the
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diagnosis phase. If a step changes state, say what it changes and how to undo it.
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## Shape of one step
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Four elements, in this order. A command with no interpretation is not a step.
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```
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무엇을 확인하는가 one line — the question this answers
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$ command the command, short
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어디를 봐야 하는가 which field/line in the output matters
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이 결과가 의미하는 것 what it tells you, and what to do next
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```
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Show the real output. If it was measured, quote it verbatim; if it is
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illustrative, say so.
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### When the step changes state
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The four elements above are the shape of a step that **reads**. A step that
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**changes state** needs a different one — otherwise the why, the failure
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symptoms and the special cases all pile into the same paragraph:
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> 정보 밀도는 높은데 **처음 따라 하는 사람의 시선 이동이 어렵습니다.**
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```
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목적 → 행동(번호 매긴 명령) → 예상 결과 → 왜 필요한가 → 문제가 생기면
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```
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```text
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### 4. libvirt 기본 연결을 system으로 설정한다
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목적
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virsh가 사용자 세션이 아니라 시스템 libvirt에 연결되도록 한다.
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1. 설정 파일을 연다.
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$ nano ~/.bashrc
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2. 다음 줄을 추가한다.
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export LIBVIRT_DEFAULT_URI=qemu:///system
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3. 저장한 설정을 현재 셸에 반영한다.
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$ source ~/.bashrc
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4. 확인한다.
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$ virsh uri
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예상 결과
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qemu:///system
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왜 필요한가
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qemu:///session과 qemu:///system은 서로 다른 libvirt 연결이다.
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VM을 system 쪽에 만들고 virsh가 session 쪽을 보고 있으면
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VM을 만들었는데도 목록에서 찾지 못할 수 있다.
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문제가 생기면
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$ virsh uri
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부터 확인한다.
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```
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**A step that only reads takes the first shape; a step that changes state takes
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this one.** Same headings every time, so the reader's eye lands in the same
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place on step 11 as on step 1.
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## Verify before publishing
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Every command in a guide must have been run, or be marked as unverified.
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**Check that the tools you reach for are actually installed on the machine
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the reader will be on** — `jq` and `yamllint` are absent more often than you
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expect, and a guide that assumes them sends the reader to install things
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mid-diagnosis.
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Two failures this catches, both real:
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- `kubectl get endpoints` — deprecated since v1.33, prints a warning
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- `kubectl exec keycloak-0 -- curl …` — the image has no curl, exit 127
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A guide that teaches a stale or failing command makes the reader doubt their
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own environment.
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## No placeholders
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`<token>` puts the value outside the document. Give the command that produces
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it. For secrets, confirm existence or length — never print the value.
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```bash
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TOKEN=$(ssh node1 'sudo cat /var/lib/rancher/k3s/server/node-token')
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echo "${#TOKEN} chars"
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```
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One exception: a value an earlier step already printed on screen, which the
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reader carries into a later step in a different shell — a session id, a realm
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UUID. The producing command is already in the document, so the value is not
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outside it. Write that slot as `{{NAME}}` (uppercase, digits, underscore), and
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say in the prose above the block which step printed it.
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Not `${NAME}` — guides use `$TOKEN`, `$SID` and friends as real shell
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variables, and a reader who reads a placeholder as one will paste it unchanged.
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`{{ }}` is not shell syntax, so pasting it fails where the reader can see it.
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## The reader cannot see what is not on screen
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Everything below came out of reading 35 finished guides in one pass. Each rule
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names the accident that produced it. None of them is a style preference — in
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every case the guide passed every other rule in this file and still handed the
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reader a wrong answer that looked right.
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### A value copied into a container is a snapshot, not a reference
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`kubectl run --env="K0=$K0"`, `docker run -e`, cloud-init user-data: each bakes
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the string as it was at that moment. From then on two spellings mean different
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things, and they differ by two characters:
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```bash
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exec pod -- sh -c '...$K0...' # the value baked into the pod
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exec pod -- sh -c '...'"$K0"'...' # the value in the shell typing this
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```
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**They agree until something restarts.** In one guide a `rollout restart` changed
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the pod IP, and a later step still read the baked copy; the request went to an
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address that no longer existed, and the failure it produced was a `500` — which
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was also that step's expected result. The screen looked correct.
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So: when a step replaces the thing a baked value points at — a pod IP, a node
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address, a lease — say in that step which spelling the next commands use.
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Prefer recreating the container. If state inside it forbids that, show the
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live-read form and add one line saying why it differs from the block above.
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**Distance is not the test.** A variable defined 700 lines up can be safe, and
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one defined nine lines up can be stale. Ask what happened in between.
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### A step that only works inside a window says when, not just what
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The four-part shape above — what / command / where to look / what it means —
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has no *when*. Several steps read correctly only during a restart, only while a
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rule is installed, only within sixty seconds. Read late, they do not error;
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they print a different, plausible number.
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Name the command that opens the window and the one that closes it, and say
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**what the reader sees if they type it after it closed** — that is what most
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readers will actually get.
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### A check must be able to fail
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For every line that says "이렇게 나오면 통과", state what would print the same
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thing while the condition is false. Three real cases:
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- `virsh list --all` used to prove a group membership took effect — it connects
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to the per-user URI, which works with no group at all
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- a `postmaster.pid` path checked on a fixed node, when the volume may be on the
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other one — "no such file" passes either way
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- `source ~/.bashrc` on a host whose login shell is zsh — true in that shell,
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gone at next login, and the symptom surfaces one guide later
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If the check passes when the step was skipped — because it reads a different
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scope, host or shell than the step wrote to — it is not a check. Put the scope
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in the command, or write one line naming the failure this check cannot see.
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### Never ship a command the guide knows is wrong
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Three guides printed a command and told the reader, in prose underneath, to
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edit it before typing. Prose is not a guard. The worst of them was a **valid**
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assignment:
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```bash
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OLDID=980ee9b7-... # ← copy from the output above
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```
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Paste it and `OLDID` holds the literal string, and the `delete` two lines later
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runs. Every other hardcoded value in those guides failed loudly — `(0 rows)`,
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`(nil)`. This one succeeded at the wrong thing.
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If prose under a block says "replace X first", the block already says it — or
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says `{{X}}`, which is not shell syntax and fails where the reader can see it.
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### One block, one machine
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A code block is the reader's copy unit. When the machine changes, the block
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ends, even when the commands form one logical step. Splitting the explanation
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in prose does not help: they copy the block.
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And a machine label tells the reader *where* a block runs — it does not put
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them there. When consecutive blocks carry different labels, the transition is
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its own step with its own command (`ssh host`, `exit`, "open a second
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terminal"). Count them per guide: entries and exits must balance. A
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verification section that runs somewhere else needs both.
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### A shell function defined mid-guide is worse than all three tiers
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It leaves no file, so the reader cannot re-read it. It dies with the shell, so
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a new window silently breaks every later step. `unset` does not reach it.
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One guide defined `R()` on line 188 and used it through line 617 — a one-letter
|
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name for `kubectl -n … exec deploy/redis -- redis-cli`. At the point of use
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the reader cannot see what command they are running.
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If something is repeated often enough to want a name, make it a script file
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with that name. If it must be a function, define it in the same block as its
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first use, name it for what it does (`redis`, not `R`), and restate the
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definition at the top of any later section more than a screen away.
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### Names the reader must already have
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A host alias, a directory, a volume, a file that no earlier step created is not
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a placeholder — it is an assumption, and the placeholder rule above does not
|
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catch it. Four guides in one set ran entirely on `ssh kc-lab-1` with no stanza
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anywhere that creates it; the second guide hits it on its first command.
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Show the command that creates it, or name the guide that owns it, in the prose
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above the first block that uses it.
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### Walk the guide twice
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`echo >>` is one case of a larger rule. Anything created under a fixed name — a
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pod, a volume, a DHCP reservation, a namespace — says what the second run
|
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prints and how to clear it first. `--rm` only removes on clean exit; Ctrl+C
|
|
leaves the pod and the next run dies on `AlreadyExists`.
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|
And anything that destroys and recreates a host says what identity changes with
|
|
it — SSH host keys, MAC-bound leases, certificates — and what that breaks the
|
|
next time the reader connects.
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### The output block belongs to the command above it
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If it came from a wider `grep`, an extra `uniq -c`, or a `sed` that rewrote
|
|
names, show that command too or say so on the line before. Readers compare
|
|
their screen to yours character by character; a silent edit makes them hunt for
|
|
a fault that is not there.
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|
|
|
### Context selectors are read as a set
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|
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`-n`, `--context`, `-h`, `-U`. One guide's `kubectl exec` was missing
|
|
`-n keycloak-lab` while the eight commands around it had it. On its own the
|
|
line looks fine; next to its neighbours it is obviously running somewhere else.
|
|
Read them as a column, not line by line.
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|
|
|
### When the same action has several forms, one of them is the step
|
|
|
|
One guide gave three ways to kill a backend and marked none of them. Show the
|
|
step; put the rest under a heading that says they are alternatives. Leaving the
|
|
reader to choose asks them to weigh a trade-off the guide has not explained yet.
|
|
|
|
### A fixed output path makes a block single-use
|
|
|
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"Change the variable and run it again" is incomplete when the block writes to a
|
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fixed file: the second run overwrites the first run's baseline, silently, and
|
|
the comparison two sections later has nothing to compare against. Name the
|
|
output path among the things to change.
|
|
|
|
### Run the remedy you prescribe
|
|
|
|
A guide diagnosed lexical sorting and prescribed `sort -g`. Every line in that
|
|
file began with the same `200`, so `sort -g` compared equal and fell through to
|
|
byte order — its output was identical to plain `sort`. The fix the guide
|
|
offered did not fix anything, and the sentence "miss this and you misread the
|
|
maximum" stayed true after following it.
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|
|
## Rationalization table
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|
|
| Excuse | Reality |
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|
|---|---|
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|
| "The pipeline gives a clean answer" | The reader needs to read the raw output, not your summary of it |
|
|
| "python -c is shorter than explaining" | It is shorter for you. The reader learns nothing and cannot adapt it |
|
|
| "jq/awk are also programming" | They are what practitioners type. The line is *program vs command*, not *language* |
|
|
| "I'll show the efficient way" | Efficient for one run. This doc is for someone learning to read the system |
|
|
| "The reader can copy-paste it" | Copy-paste is not the goal. Knowing where to look is |
|
|
| "I verified the logic mentally" | Run it. Two commands in a recent guide were wrong and both looked right |
|
|
| "It's obvious what this output means" | Then write the one line. If it is obvious it costs nothing |
|
|
| "`-w '%{http_code}'` is precise" | Precise about one field. The reader debugging TLS needs `-v`, not `200` |
|
|
| "It's fewer commands" | Fewer for you to type. The reader cannot tell which action they are in the middle of |
|
|
| "The file ends up the same either way" | Only on the first run. `echo >>` appends again every time someone repeats the guide |
|
|
| "So I should use nano for everything" | No. The trigger is authoring a file the reader must understand. `grep`, `virsh`, a long `virt-install` stay as they are |
|
|
| "`python3 -c` only checks syntax" | Then it misses the schema. If the format has a validator — `cloud-init schema`, `nginx -t`, `--dry-run` — that is the step |
|
|
| "The prose right under it says to change that value" | The reader copies the block. Prose is not a guard — put `{{NAME}}` in the block |
|
|
| "The variable is defined earlier in the same shell" | Ask what restarted in between. A pod IP baked at line 877 was stale by line 764 |
|
|
| "The label says which machine it runs on" | A label says where, not how to get there. The transition is its own step |
|
|
| "It's the same command, just shorter" | A one-letter function hides the command at the exact moment the reader needs to read it |
|
|
| "The check passed" | Ask what it would print if the step had been skipped. Three checks in one set passed either way |
|
|
|
|
## Red flags — stop and rewrite
|
|
|
|
- `python3 -c` or a `<<'PY'` heredoc inside a guide
|
|
- JSON parsed with a language runtime instead of `jq` or the tool's own `-o`
|
|
- a pipeline whose purpose you cannot state in one clause
|
|
- a command with no "what to look at" line under it
|
|
- `delete`/`kill`/`restart` before any observation step
|
|
- `<placeholder>` with no command that produces it
|
|
- output shown that you never actually ran
|
|
- only the extracting form of a tool appears, never the reading form
|
|
- a config file or YAML built with `printf >`, `echo >>`, or `cat <<EOF`
|
|
- one line stacking connect + redirect + file creation (`ssh host 'cat > f' < f`)
|
|
- `python3 -c` checking syntax when the format has its own validator
|
|
- a step that appends, so walking the guide twice appends the line twice
|
|
- prose under a block telling the reader to edit the command before typing it
|
|
- a block whose machine label differs from the one above, with no command between
|
|
- a one- or two-letter shell function, or any function defined far from its use
|
|
- a host alias, directory or volume that no step in any guide creates
|
|
- `--rm` with no line saying what a Ctrl+C leaves behind
|
|
- a "통과" line that would print the same thing if the step had been skipped
|
|
- a step that reads correctly only during a window, with no word about the window
|
|
- a remedy you have not run against the data that made you prescribe it
|
|
|
|
## References
|
|
|
|
Per-technology command vocabulary — what practitioners reach for first, not
|
|
an encyclopedia. Load only the one you need.
|
|
|
|
- [kubernetes.md](references/kubernetes.md)
|
|
- [linux-systemd.md](references/linux-systemd.md)
|
|
- [networking-tls.md](references/networking-tls.md)
|
|
- [datastores.md](references/datastores.md)
|